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Malo lelei everyone this slide is about a boy that wanted to go to space and there was an rocketship at the side of an shop so he jump of eximent so he jumped in and he thought he was going to the moon but he didn't and he wanted to go one more time but he was out of couins he was gonna giveup going to space but he saw an lemon box so he started an lemon shop he did for hes hole life so he finally he closed his shop and he went for a walked and he saw the rocket ship from his childhood o he put all of his coins in and he hoped in and pressed the yellow batton but nothing happend so he smacked the machine and it went flying. Have you made a story that needs one hundred words?

Kia Orana everyone this is my story that i did for this week

this is not finished but i hope you guys like it enjoy.do you guys have some advice for my story?